Talk:See You Next Time BoBoiBoy/@comment-27214641-20161019025924

Someone really need to fix few part in the plot. It looks more a transcript than a plot in the last few parts -_- And I think it's better that you should not add something that isn't important to the plot. Also you need to shorten a few things from the plot like:

Fang suddenly appeared, patting Ochobot's back and saying, “Not a chance, how come would I ever leave you guys?” Ochobot is surprised. “Eh? You didn’t come along with your captain?” “Why would I follow my brother? He’s already strong. I would need to take care of... huh?” Gopal, Yaya and Ying right away got angry. Fang was confused about why. “YOUR BROTHER!!??” They screamed at him. " “That’s right! Isn’t our hair style the same?” Fang replies. “Why didn’t you tell us earlier, huh??” they asked and went to chasing Fang while Fang ran away. “Sorry! I forgot!” Fang said. “Can’t you talk to your own brother before letting him beat us up?!” Gopal asked. “Save me BoBoiBoy! Argh!” Fang screamed. “hehehe… Awesome!” BoBoiBoy responded

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That piece of plot could be shorten, so it will be look like this :

Fand suddenly appeared and saying that he would never leave them, surprise everyone and Ochobot asked why he didn't come along with his captain. Fang revealed Kaizo - refer him as his brother - he's already strong. With Fang reveal Kaizo is his brother, it made Yaya, Ying and Gopal angry at him for not reveal it earlier, but Fang said he's forgot to, which make Yaya, Ying and Gopal chase him at anger.

▪▪▪▪▪▪▪ From what I've learned in most animated show wiki, nobody will read a very long written plot. So I think you better make it as short as possible, but still contains every scene in the episode, with things unimportant to the plot like "Fang suddenly appeared, patting Ochobot's back and saying..." could be shortened to just "Fang suddenly appeared and saying...". Because "Patting Ochobot's back" are simply unimportant, atleast for the plot. The place you can write every single dialogs and everyhing they do like "BoboiBoy laughing" or "Earth Golem is destroyed when Kaizo attack it with whatever weapon" is called Transcript page.